This week in Te Ngahere we have been learning to use metaphors in our poems to describe ourselves. Our WALT was to Use language features appropriately showing a developing understanding of effect. This is my first draft and I think I did well with comparing myself with other things. What I enjoyed the most was that I found it quite challenging but I got there at the end. I think what I can be able to do better next time is to write more descriptive words.
Missy is….
Missy is a marshmallow gentle and sweet,
Missy is a koala soft and cuddly,
Missy is a Kauri tree looking after the little bushes,
Missy is a stray yelping for help,
Missy is a Jeep hurtling through the bushes,
Missy is a bull actively charging at the introdures
Kia ora Missy, it is Payton. I like how you did a post about you, with all these amazing words. I like the one with you saying Missy is a bull actively charging at the intruders . `You did great work with that Missy. I love your work, keep it up.
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