Moment in time

Last week in Te Ngahere, we made a piece of descriptive writing about the forest. Our learning intention was to use present tense verbs and have descriptive language, I really enjoyed writing about the forest  because I think I described it really well. Next time I think I should work on getting allot more writing done because I had plenty of time to finish. This is my draft copy.

Moment in time

The bright yellow sun gazing towards the ground as you explore the beautiful interest and discovering new things around the forest. The clouds gathering around as the water starts to drizzle down to the ground. The colorful flowers blooming as the canopy of trees are swaying side to side. The bees buzzing around while the birds are chirping high in the sky. The wind blowing as you feel it tingling your back from how cool it feels. The smell of the autumn breeze blowing through your nostrils. Curiously, you continue to wonder on through the mysterious path of gravel.